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Whenever I let the words flow by ~knight-in-grey:iconknight-in-grey:



As I keep my eyes in your slender fingers
I wish I could feel them on my face
Slowly tracing down my painful expression
Giving birth to nameless tears
That would linger in your warm touch

As I find myself far and alone
I feel my mask falling into the water
Drowning with all my shame and lies
Silently waving goodbye to this face
That beared the heaviest of sorrows

I long for a warmth that will strike my lips
I crave for a care that will hold me tight
I pray for a voice that will say it's alright
I wonder if there will ever be a chance
I want...

So undo this tie around my neck
And release this desire deeply locked
For I have held back this truth as a key
That someday would be wielded by only one
That day...

When I can cry out for myself
Tell the World who I really am
Throw away what I had made up
To satisfy only who was not me
As I imprisioned what truly matters

The tenderness that I want no more
The words that I wonder were ever true
The fear I pray will be forever gone
The fake smiles that never would fade

The kiss of release that I longed for so much

Now, take my hand and free me...
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Author's Comments

Just an experimentation. Some sentences popped up while I was watching some AMVs, and I gather them in a poem. The meaning of the whole work came while I was writing the last verses, and I changed some things to fit the general idea.

Basically, a cry for libertation in the shape of another. A person who had to hold back the truth inside and show a chaste and fake self. Initially meant to be somewhat erotic, but I sticked to the lightly sensual. I'm just not sure if the "sensual" was evident anywhere...

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:iconpointsquare:
Muito bonito, nas primeiras palavras parecem uma música, depois da metade vira uma tentativa de afirmação, liberdade, algo assim!

Bom foi assim que eu entendi! ^__^ ajuda mais se for em português mas blz agente dá um jeito!

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Point >_<!
:iconknight-in-grey:
Thanx a lot pelo comment, tio!
:iconcloudstriker:
wow! i really like it... right to my favorites!

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if you are not in,that just mean that you are out...

...and sometimes in between---
:iconnanhuei:
Realmente, a primeira parte ta bem.... sensual eheheh
Imagino q parte do seu poema seja sobre vc mesma???

=3 Bom trabalho fia!
:iconknight-in-grey:
Creio que nenhuma. Ou toda. Enfim. Tinha outra pessoa em mente quando escrevi isso, não eu. Mas como fui eu quem criou esse texto... who knows...

btw, vc manja alguma coisa de FFX? preciso de beta readers...
:iconknight-in-grey:
hey, thanks a lot for the fav! And thank you for always coming to see my stuff. Shame on me that I don't do the same for you... But now I've got time. I'll start taking better care of my deviant friends. :)
:iconnanhuei:
Nom manjo nadinhaaaaaa
Nunca joguei direito o FFX,so na sua casa msm... ehehehe

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March 11, 2007
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